edonohana ([info]edonohana) wrote,

Heroes: One Moment, One Chance

Series: Heroes
Disclaimer: Everything belongs to the creators, and I am not one of them.
Spoilers: ENORMOUS SPOILERS through "Six Months Ago," plus implied spoilers for everything through "Parasite."
Rating: G, or PG if you live in a nunnery.
Summary: Hiro can bend the space-time continuum. Hiro/Charlie. 850 words.
Notes: A gift for [info]oyceter.



He had thought it would take a while to convince her that he was not Hiro-from-this-time-right-now, but he hadn’t counted on Charlie’s eidetic memory. She was on to him almost before he’d finished knocking on her door.

“Your hair’s longer than it was yesterday,” she said from the doorway. “Maybe a quarter of an inch on the bangs, half an inch at the back. And you’ve lost weight— I’d say eight pounds, maybe more. And— is that a real sword?!“

He hadn’t forgotten a thing. The color of her hair, the light in her eyes, the way she said some words slow and others fast— he’d been right about all of it. Nothing had been forgotten or misremembered. She’d lived in his mind as bright and true as if she’d been imprinted into a memory matrix, like the one in Chris Claremont-era “X-Men” that captured the essence of the dead (and resurrected, and cloned, and impersonated ad infinitum, but at that point, dead) Jean Grey’s personality. But not even the most sophisticated matrix could replace a real person. Here she was, his own lost Charlie, standing in front of him, close enough to touch.

“Hey, hey,” she said. Her hands were on his shoulders, comforting him before he even realized he needed it. “What’s the matter?”

Hiro scrubbed at his eyes and straightened his spine. “I am future Hiro,” he explained. “From one year in the future.”

Charlie started to smile. Then stopped. “One year…” She drew her finger down his cheek, catching a tear he’d missed. “Am I… Wait, do you know…?”

“I know,” said Hiro. “You tell present Hiro, in near future. You are very brave. A hero.”

“It’s OK,” she said. “I knew it wouldn’t be long. And the last six months have been wonderful.” Her eyes shone brighter, but she blinked until they lost that glittery sheen. “And hey, I’ve still got the trip to Japan!”

He hesitated. It was hard to explain these things in English, even now. He switched languages. “I didn’t have good control of my power then… now… Present Hiro teleported to Tokyo by accident, and then he… I… couldn’t get back.”

“Oh.”

“We never said good-bye. We never…” His cheeks began to heat up. “I would never have left you on purpose.”

“I know,” said Charlie, also in Japanese. She frowned. “I… have knew? In future, I knowed?”

“’I would have known,’” said Hiro. She liked him to correct her Japanese. After all, he only had to do it once per mistake.

“I would have known.” There was no doubt whatsoever in her voice. “But… why are you here? You always say, two Hiro is time…” She switched to English. “Meeting yourself is a temporal paradox.”

“’Temporal paradox,’” he repeated in Japanese, so she could learn it. It was such a handy phrase! “Today your aunt suddenly got sick, and you had to go away for a week to take care of her. You called in to the diner and left a message. Present Hiro missed you, but when you came back you seemed very happy, and you said she was much better.”

“I do not have aunts,” Charlie said doubtfully. “I have three uncles… Oh. Oh! I see! We did go—we go! We go now!”

“Don’t tell present Hiro,” he warned her as she picked up the phone. “Just say it’s your aunt. I’ll find out later that you never had any, and then I’ll know to come.”

“I read this morning that the weather in Kyoto was 22 degrees Celsius, 73 degrees Fahrenheit,” she said in English, hanging up the phone. “A few passing clouds, otherwise clear. Winds light and variable. The cherry blossoms are at their peak. Can we take the train from Tokyo?”

“We don’t need a train.” He offered his hand. “I bend the space-time continuum.”

She took it. “Ikimashou, anata.” “Let’s go, you.”

“That’s a little bit wrong,” Hiro said. “When you say ‘let’s go,’ you don’t need to also say ‘you.’ The ‘you’ is implied.”

“It’s not wrong at all,” said Charlie. “Different anata. Hiro… ikimashou, anata.” “Let’s go, my darling.”

Hiro closed his eyes. When he opened them, pink petals fluttered in the light and variable winds. Charlie stood under a gnarled old sakura tree, spinning this way and that as her wide eyes took in the startled picnickers under the tree next door, the elegant angles of the temple roof, the tray of sakura mochi and the guy selling it, and the skyline split by the wonderful rocket ship of the Kyoto Tower.

“Kyoto, konnichi-wa!” she shouted.

Then she turned to kiss him, so quickly that he didn’t have time to be afraid that he would vanish away. Her lips were as warm and soft as he had imagined, but the boldness of her tongue was a wonderful surprise. He could feel her heartbeat against his chest, ticking away the moments, and then his own merged with hers, and he didn’t even know when it was that he lost his bearings. They might have been kissing for seconds, or hours, or an eternity. He might have stopped time.

I bend the space-time continuum, thought Hiro. I can make one moment last forever. But, Charlie— so can you.
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[info]oracne

March 14 2007, 18:34:06 UTC 5 years ago

"We don’t need a train." He offered his hand. "I bend the space-time continuum."

Best. Line. Ever.

I am supposed to be working....

[info]edonohana

March 31 2007, 22:39:52 UTC 5 years ago

Late, but... thank you very much!

[info]thomasyan

March 14 2007, 19:22:47 UTC 5 years ago

Oh, man, that is so perfect!

[info]edonohana

March 31 2007, 22:40:13 UTC 5 years ago

Glad you liked it!

[info]laurashapiro

March 14 2007, 23:02:21 UTC 5 years ago

Oh, this is wonderful! Thank you!

::heart grows three sizes::

[info]edonohana

March 31 2007, 22:40:30 UTC 5 years ago

Awww... Thank you!

[info]minnow1212

March 14 2007, 23:53:09 UTC 5 years ago

Ohhhhhhhhhhhh! Wonderful.

>“’Temporal paradox,’” he repeated in Japanese, so she could learn it. It was such a handy phrase! <

Hee! Yes, yes, it is.

And I love that Hiro's the one to teach Charlie here, and that she shouts "Kyoto, konnichi-wa!" Yay!

[info]edonohana

March 31 2007, 22:41:52 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you! It reminds me of when I first went to Japan, and all the Japanese I knew was learned from anime, so I didn't know how to ask the time, but I could say "I am the priestess of Suzaku" and "Die!"

[info]mistressrenet

March 15 2007, 00:40:22 UTC 5 years ago

I love you.

That is all.

[info]edonohana

March 31 2007, 22:42:06 UTC 5 years ago

Aww, thank you!

[info]umadoshi

March 15 2007, 00:56:47 UTC 5 years ago

Hiro fic! With bonus X-Men geekery! Approval noted. (And it's lovely. ^^)

[info]greenapple2004

March 15 2007, 02:52:37 UTC 5 years ago

Seconded! Claremont geekery!

[info]edonohana

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[info]edonohana

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[info]oyceter

March 15 2007, 02:17:30 UTC 5 years ago

Oh!! Thank you! This is awesome!

I love the Hiro-voice, particularly how he can pinpoint X-Men down into eras (of course he can), and noting that "temporal paradox" is a good thing to know.

And oh! She calls him "anata" and they get to watch the cherry blossoms, even though she can't be with him for too long. And I love the "Kyoto, konnichi-wa!" and the last line especially.

[info]edonohana

March 31 2007, 22:35:03 UTC 5 years ago

Sorry for the disgracefully late reply, but-- I'm really glad you liked it.

I had the idea that Hiro and Charlie would both think it's worthwhile to learn new words, especially handy ones like "temporal paradox," no matter how short the time span is to use them, and once I thought that, sakura immediately came to mind.

[info]electrumqueen

March 15 2007, 02:33:46 UTC 5 years ago

Oh, oh *oh*. I never got Hiro and Charlie, on the show. They were rushed and I didn't really know her, not like I'd've wanted to. She wasn't that interesting, for me. But eeeh. Your Charlie? Makes me wish I'd paid more attention.
Makes me sort-of reluctantly ship them?
Which boils down to I really really liked this and they are both gigantic woobies. You are awesome.

[info]edonohana

March 31 2007, 22:35:22 UTC 5 years ago

Oh, cool! Thank you very much.

[info]mostlypointless

March 15 2007, 03:23:18 UTC 5 years ago

Oh, this just made my day. Absolutely beautiful. I love Charlie so much, I keep telling myself she'll be back someday. Which I guess isn't impossible in the world of Heroes.

In short, thank you!

[info]edonohana

March 31 2007, 22:35:53 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you! It would be great if this really happened in canon...

[info]manuelj

March 15 2007, 04:12:23 UTC 5 years ago

Really really beatiful, we really need more Hiro/Charlie goodness in the world, it would make everything easier *g*

[info]edonohana

March 31 2007, 22:43:51 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you! I agree.

[info]theladyemichan

March 15 2007, 05:13:34 UTC 5 years ago

So sweet! I miss Charlie! Great depiction of her smartness and their bilingual conversation. I'm so glad they kissed! How cute!

[info]edonohana

March 31 2007, 22:44:13 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you! I just really wanted to see that kiss...

[info]cunien

March 15 2007, 08:37:34 UTC 5 years ago

Oh, this is beautiful! So lovely to see them have the moment they were robbed of in the show timeline. Also:

'“Kyoto, konnichi-wa!” she shouted. '

Hooray! She reacts to teleporting the exact same way as Hiro! Love it!
x.

[info]edonohana

March 31 2007, 22:39:14 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you! I did feel that they had a lot in common, with their open-hearted joy in living.

[info]norah

March 15 2007, 15:54:45 UTC 5 years ago

Awww. what a wonderful little fixy story. It makes my heart feel a little better, and I like them switching back and forth to say the things they need to in two languages. ♥

[info]edonohana

March 31 2007, 22:39:31 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you! (I love your icon.)

[info]mosellegreen

March 15 2007, 20:30:37 UTC 5 years ago

Awwwwww. Thank you!

[info]edonohana

March 31 2007, 22:38:15 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks for reading!

[info]prettyannamoon

March 16 2007, 04:16:02 UTC 5 years ago

You know how most fanfic is just good fun, "what if's" to pass the time between episodes, while there are a rare few that totally should be canon? This is one of the latter. Awesome job!

[info]edonohana

March 31 2007, 22:38:01 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you very much!

[info]sheepfairy

March 16 2007, 10:01:50 UTC 5 years ago

I love this so much! I really like the use of language, and the shifts between talking in Japanese and talking in English.

And the last line was just so perfect!

[info]edonohana

March 31 2007, 22:37:39 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you! The language shifts were done beautifully in canon, so I enjoyed running with it.

[info]yetanothermask

March 17 2007, 18:05:17 UTC 5 years ago

*so heartbreaking* Thanks for coming up with a way to bring them back together!

[info]edonohana

March 31 2007, 22:37:05 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you! I like to imagine that it could have happened...

[info]midasu

March 25 2007, 04:25:24 UTC 5 years ago

I love this, I love Charlie(She's on Ugly Betty right now, and her character's name is actually Charlie. I kept wanting to write some kind of crossover fic where she goes to Hiro, but well I can't write. So lately I've been missing her even more, so reading your story was wonderful).

[info]edonohana

March 31 2007, 22:36:30 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you! I have to start watching Ugly Betty. I've heard good things about it.

[info]ibroketuesday

August 25 2007, 11:08:53 UTC 4 years ago

Alright. This fic is lovely, and it's also the first Heroes fic I ever read. I got linked to it somehow before I'd ever watched the show (I caught up on all the episodes online), and I liked it then, but naturally didn't get it. It's such a pleasant surprise to find it again.

[info]edonohana

October 1 2007, 02:02:17 UTC 4 years ago

Thank you! Wow, first fic...

[info]redbrunja

January 16 2008, 06:23:38 UTC 4 years ago

Oh, god, this was sweet and so heartbreaking.

[info]genarti

February 7 2008, 05:16:51 UTC 4 years ago

A friend linked me to this, and oh, Hiro. Oh, Charlie. This is note-perfect (the memory matrix! The language-switching, and the line about the train!) and beautifully sweet. So very lovely.
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